Private, A Flash Fiction Story

24 Jun

Private, A Flash Fiction story by Ray Daley.

From my daze, I eventually hear him hollering. It’s the Captain.

“Private! Private!”

I walk over and fix him with that look of disinterest.

“It’s hardly private any more, is it sir? Not when you keep shouting it out loud like that. Can I go now?”

I just left him trying to work that out for himself.
He’s probably still there now.

THE END.

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